Brilliant start
First things first: get rid of the "tapping, clicking". I genuinely think it ruins the potential of a soon to be fantastic track
The solo had great strength (0:14), but at 0:18 it seemed to falter slightly in my opinion until 0:20. Maybe just my eyes but it seemed strained.
The solo at 0:44 was good, maybe could do with a little reverb or shadow bass, just seems a little too lonely.
0:59 was great, I loved the complimenting guitar, but maybe lose the 1:04 still keeping the 1:12.
I don't think this track suits a fade out either, maybe have a heavy bass accompaniment to bring it home.
Apologies if I went a bit mental with the time references, but I believe this could be a fantastic piece given some refinement.