KartoTolmex's Reviews

[Reservations for None!]

A Shame

Real shame you couldn't get this done in time, it would have easily made it into the collaboration.

Character detail was fantastic, and you managed to squeeze a fair amount of humour considering the length.

An enjoyable watch.

[Narwhals]

Very good

Good amount of humour, and I love the animation style.

Good choice making it a loop too, very impressive submission.

[The Final Act]

Wow

That really does deserve the daily feature.

Rarely can anything have such an impact without any words, but that was fantastic.

[Thing-Thing Arena 3]

Welcome Addition

Needless to say, as soon as you see the name come up you know the submission is going to exude quality.

Never tire of Thing Thing, and it's good to get back into the fray.

[Bunny Invasion 2]

Eat My Bullets

Definitely the best in it's genre.

I can tell this game will keep me busy for some time to come yet. From the humour, to the animation and the overall satisfaction to killing hordes of rabbits.

Added to my favourites, brilliant game.

[The Religion Game]

Let the flames begin.

Really won't be surprised if you get abuse for doing this.

Lose health for religion? Fantastic

A different save if only to annoy people, good music too.

[Locomotion (DEMO)]

Good start

A good start, but I feel you could do with some backing.

I don't know whether it's intentional, but at the moment it feels very empty.

0:14-0:16 feels disjointed, a "break beat" I find is usually more effective once the track has gone on for longer and is more established.

Up the overall intensity of the bass throughout and I could see this being a hit.

[Eternal Glory (Unfinished)]

Brilliant start

First things first: get rid of the "tapping, clicking". I genuinely think it ruins the potential of a soon to be fantastic track

The solo had great strength (0:14), but at 0:18 it seemed to falter slightly in my opinion until 0:20. Maybe just my eyes but it seemed strained.

The solo at 0:44 was good, maybe could do with a little reverb or shadow bass, just seems a little too lonely.

0:59 was great, I loved the complimenting guitar, but maybe lose the 1:04 still keeping the 1:12.

I don't think this track suits a fade out either, maybe have a heavy bass accompaniment to bring it home.

Apologies if I went a bit mental with the time references, but I believe this could be a fantastic piece given some refinement.

wilb0b responds:

wow! thanks!

yeah i kinda just threw this together just to hear the music quality.

yeah around 0:18 i did skrew up a bit its a weird fingering position arpeggio but i wasn't worried about it, this is just a draft.

I actually cut out 0:45 and on from the song and added another solo part for my other guitarist, then it goes into a drum N' bass transition.

it'll be awhile till I put out a rough final

thanks for the review it helped a lot!

~WiLb0b

[Extreme (FF8) - Remix]

A new fan

Came here having listened to your rendition of The Legendary Beast, and you've amazed me with this adaptation as well.

If you're taking requests I would love it if you tried experimenting with The Salt Flats, that's my favourite track in VIII (as I mentioned on Legendary Beast) and I would love to see what you could do with it.

Downloaded and added as favourite artist

viion responds:

Thank you so much =) Will do that song.